Saturday, November 1, 2008
Electric Car Advert by James and FIlm
First of all, There was light the desk lamp was turn on.The vaccum start to working.The fan was swivelled air around the room. The mixer is unplugged and the wuffle maker and blendder follow it.Also radio and iron. Then the fan and lamp unplugged andboth fly down to the floor fllow All applince went down the garden path and standing on kerb .Suddenly they found a torch and shone the beam of car linght. Finally ,The car stopped.All household alppliance swept around thr car
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Light should be lightning.
Turn on should be turned on.
Start to working should be started to work.
And also a few more mistakes.
But it's really good!
From Teen 6 Friday.
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